The mother is preaching at the girl to tell her how to act. The long sentences signify the many dictatorial orders that she gives her daughter. The use of words like slut tell us what she will think of her daughter if her daughter fails to behave the way her mother thinks she should. The long demands are separated by semicolons and areas where the girl questions her mother very ineffectively. The long sentences in stream of consciousness style show how repressive the mothers demands are to a modern woman.
All the references to housework and sewing again show the tone of repressiveness to the daughter. The theme of Jamaica Kincaids girl is in the conflict between mother and daughter. It is a perfect story about the generation gap. The mother gives the daughter advice to make her a proper woman, like Wash the clothes on Monday and put them on the stone heap; wash the color clothes on Tuesday and put them on the clothesline to dry; dont walk barehead in the sun¦ (Kincaid).
Her advice gets more and more firm as the story continues; culminating in the final line you mean to say that after all you are really going to be the kind of woman who the baker wont let near the bread? (Kincaid). The daughter is from a different generation and may not heed her advice. According to enotes, consists solely of a list of admonitions from mother to daughter, increasingly dichotomous and ultimately manipulative (enotes). As a feminist Jamaica Kincaid shows the reader the difference between older generation and newer generation.
She doesnt ask her daughter to behave this way; she orders it. The aim of the character is easy. The mother wants to rule her daughters life. She has many somewhat antiquated, definitely repressive ideas about what a woman is supposed to be. She orders her daughter, talking at her and never to her. Only twice in the story does the daughter question or speak against her demands, and she does so rather meekly. The mother demands her to be a proper woman and not become a slut, which her mother thinks she is already on the road to becoming.
She is using the scare tactic of becoming a slut to demand that her daughter be good. The aim of this mother is certainly not to be nurturing in the more typical way or to get to know her daughter or listen to her. The daughter has no aim in this story. She is mostly a passive participant, listening to the lecture/rant of her mother about her life. As stated, she does speak against her mother twice, but not in any meaningful way, which speaks volumes about the lack of relationship or intimacy between mother and daughter.
At the end of this story in spite of the mothers rant, the reader is not convinced that the daughter will follow her mothers orders. She will not become a slut, but she may become a much more modern woman, which will cause dire conflict between mother and daughter.
Enotes. At the Bottom of the River. Retrieved at http://www. enotes. com/short-story-criticism/bottom-river-jamaica-kincaid Jamaica Kincaid. Retrieved at http://voices. cla. umn. edu/vg/Bios/entries/kincaid_jamaica. html Kincaid, Jamaica. Girl.